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i got the trial for flash because i have to use it to do my assignment for animation class :3

though this was just kind of a test, practicing wing flaps which i think i gotten the hang of by now :3

so vince is my little guinea pig here
i really need to upload more pics of him...i draw him so much

so please, critique if you can! but only judge the wings since thats the only part im worried about here
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You did a very good job on the wings. I like the detail. You added good realistic motion in his body(since he is flying).:la: I think that you should make more of these on Shadow cats.:iconshadowcatcommunity: You also did good on the body. It fits the wings perfectly. LOL Have to do like 100 words. Annyway, your a great artist and I love this. :iconiloveitplz: Karrybird = AWESOMESAUCE! You are very good at annimating.:iconcatlaplz:I can see the annimation very clearly (which is good). Omg this took sooo long to write. Yes, you SHOULD draw him more.:la:


SOOO CUUTE!!! I LOVE IT!!!! LOL.
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unicown Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
what is this flash program? is it the photoshop one? ;o
i've heard lots of people talking about it, but i'm just like, "derp what's flash". xD
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Filmographer
yes, its adobe flash professional, an animation program that most cartoons are made from nowadays :3
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amerindub Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
Really good work so far :) I can't find any fault with the wing animation.
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XFlight Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
CUTE!
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Albaharu Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
very cute nimation *_*
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
thank you!
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Sohfu Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so cool :D
He's so cuuute~*
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
thank you!
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kirame19 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student General Artist
flash is...difficult to use... T^T
but this is coolio!
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
oh god i hate how difficult it is, WHY CANT THINGS BE SIMPLE?

but thank you!
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xyorux Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
i like this its cute i think the tail should move a little more though and he should blink maybe more of a ear twitch to give more perfomance? but the wings are done really well. nice and solid drawing here. sorry for saying about other parts but im also a animation student so i look at things as a whole piece with all the principles. :P the only thing i can say about the wings is the line looks thicker on them thn the rest of the drawing so maybe try and keep that bit more matched unless thats what you were going for :)
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
ah! thank you so much for your comment.
i purposefully only animated the wings here for practice, so i kept the rest static so that i didnt have to spend a lot of time worrying about that. but in more serious works i will definitely move every aspect that should. :3

again, thank you!
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Thomas-Snappy Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
karry dear god is this cute :'I
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
oh really now, you think so? X3
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Thomas-Snappy Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
look at the cuteness. LOOK AT IT. XD
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
I DONT SEE IT!!!
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Thomas-Snappy Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
>:I //presses face to screen//
DO YOU SEE IT NOW WOMAN?
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
NO...NOTHING!!!
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Thomas-Snappy Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oAo THIS CALLS FOR DRASTIC MEASURES!
BRING ME THE FUNNEL!
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
oh god not the funnel... D8
maybe we can work something out...
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Rocket14 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hksjrlfkdkslj omg i just died of cuteness overload X3
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nannaquin Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG THIS IS SO CUTE KARRY!!! :meow:
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Karry-Bird Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
thank you!! X3
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nannaquin Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student General Artist
np! :3
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